2021高考英语读后续写素材积累(三)
一:语料积累
1.Death would be a relief What worried him the most was the thought of his parents not knowing what happened to him, not knowing whether he was dead or alive (心理描写)
2.An even crazier idea kept popping into(不断进入) his head (心理描写)
3.Two nights later, Stanley lay awake staring up at the star-filled sky He was too happy to fall asleep (动作描写,心理描写)
4.They walked for what seemed like a very long time, and still never came across (时间漫长,心中焦急)
5.A wave of terror rushed over him when he saw (恐惧,心理描写)
6.The fear made him dizzy He took a breath, summoned his courage, and continued (恐惧,克服恐惧,心理描写)
7.He heard his own heart heat (激动,紧张,害怕等强烈的情绪) 8.He felt the scream explode inside him (恐惧,心理描写)
9.Stanley could hear his heart beat Each beat told him he was still alive, at least for one more second (恐惧,心理描写)
10.He felt as if he was walking in a dream, not quite able to comprehend what was going on around him (心理描写)
11.Twitch had been arrested for stealing a car He claimed he could break into a car, disconnect the alarm, and hot-wire(短路点火) the engine, all in less than a minute (人物,动作描写)
12.He sat there awhile and caught his breath As he got back to his feet, (动作描写) 13.You'd already thrown up everything that was inside your stomach (病痛) 14.His throat felt as if it was coated with sandpaper (干渴难忍)
15.He had trouble adjusting to the flavor He washed them down with a swig(大口喝) of water (饮食,动作描写)
16.He glanced at Zero and Zero's eyes met his (动作描写)
17.He walked into the camp office, slamming the door behind him (发怒,动作描写) 18.\(语言描写,神态描写)
19.It was a welcome relief Once again, Stanley felt that destiny was on his side (欣慰,心理描写)
20.环境与事件细节描写
21.The town shriveled(干枯) and dried up along with the lake, and the people who lived there(干旱,环境描写)
22.The bus ride became increasingly bumpy(颠簸的) because the road was no longer paved(铺设好的) (道路,环境描写)
23.The air seemed thick with heat and dirt (天气,环境描写)
二:文本训练
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The spot of red was what first caught Randy Heiss’s attention. He was hiking the remote expanse of land behind his ranch (大牧场) in Patagonia, Arizona, a town near the U.S.-Mexico border, and covered the grass was a balloon—or at least the remains of one. Heiss walked toward it with his dog, Feliz, thinking he should pick up the latex (乳胶) pieces and throw them away.
That’s when he noticed the balloon’s string was attached to a piece of paper.
“Dayami,” it read on one side, in a child’s writing. A hand-drawn bow accompanied the word. Heiss turned the paper over quickly. It was a numbered list, all in Spanish. “My Spanish isn’t very good, but I could see it was a Christmas list,” he said.
Heiss was charmed. He thought that a child had tried to send Santa Claus a Christmas wish list by balloon, something he used to do himself when he was a kid. Nobody had ever returned the letters Heiss had sent into the air, but he wondered whether he couldn’t find the child who had sent this one.
It would be difficult, but Heiss knew about 20 miles to the southwest, just across the border, was the city of Nogales, Mexico, with a population of about a quarter million. “Based on the prevailing wind (盛行风), I was pretty sure that’s where it came from,” he said.
Heiss brought the note home to his wife, who is fluent in Spanish and helped him translate the list. They determined that Dayami, probably a girl, had asked for a doll, a dollhouse, clothes, and art supplies among other things.
Heiss then posted about his request on the Internet, attaching photos, hoping some of his
friends in Nogales might know the girl’s family. A few days passed with no leads; Heiss worried that time was running out before Christmas. Therefore, he decided to send a private message to Radio XENY, an AM radio station based in Nogales if they could help.
续写要求:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:
To his surprise, someone from the station called him back right away. Paragraph 2:
They bought just about everything on Dayami’s list. Paragraph 1:
To his surprise, someone from the station called him back right away. Heiss’s wife helped explain the situation to Radio XENY host, who talked on the air about the quest to find Dayami and posted it on the station’s website. The next morning, Heiss awoke to another message from Radio XENY: They had located Dayami, an eight-year-old girl, and her family, who indeed lived in Nogales. Would they be willing to arrange a get-together at the radio station?
Paragraph 2:
They bought just about everything on Dayami’s list. They also bought a few other toys for good measure. Then the Heisses drove for 45 minutes, crossing the border into Nogales. They arrived at the Radio XENY offices with presents and finally met her. Her parents explained to the Heisses that Dayami had been writing a letter containing her Christmas list to Santa and sending it by balloon for years, but this was the first time anyone had found the note. “It was a beautiful, beautiful experience,” Heiss said. He paused. “Quite healing for us,” he added.
2021届高考英语读后续写素材积累(三)



