有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2015·菏泽市高三一模)On my way to the bookstore，I noticed a group of people surrounded two anxious foreigners.I stopped and found that they were tourist from Canada who careless left a very important wallet in a taxi.I accompanied them to the nearest police station and without their help，we got in touch with the taxi company.We told a moment ago a driver had just turned in a wallet and then a policeman drive us to the company without delay.The two Canadians happily claimed their wallet，that contained their passports，flight tickets，some cash or credit cards.They expressed our thanks to me.I feel it is really a great pleasure to help the others. 答案
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
our thanks to me.I feel it is really a great pleasure to help their
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2015·保定一模)Last summer，I was going to visit a friend in Hangzhou.I went to the station to buy ticket.After get it，I turned back pick up my bag from the floor.To my shock，I found it had gone.Luckily I had all my money in my pocket，but the only clothes I had was those I was wearing on.I felt quite uneasy.When I finally arrived at my friend home，she lent me several change of clothes.I was very happy that I can wear clean but beautiful clothes at last. 答案
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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每句不超过两个错误； 2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2015·绵阳一诊)Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom，but I found the teachers patient and considerate.Besides，I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere on class.I decided to make best of it.I work hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties，they were seldom available.Soon，I became one of the top student in my class，which greatly increased my confident and got me motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are. 答案
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
determines who you are.
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2015·滨州市高三一模)Last Wednesday afternoon，we held a debate on the following topic：
living at home and living in the school dormitory.Which do you prefer？Opinions are vary from person to person.As to me，I stick to my own preference and I have my own reason.First of all，living in a dorm will develop my ability of living independently and solving problems by yourself.Secondly，living in the dorm with others，I find them easier to share feelings with my friends.A dorm is more like a society，which enable students to learn to adapt to each other，thus preparing for the social life later.In all，we are of same age and have common feelings towards many things.Most important，living with my friends will improve our team spirit，that will definitely be beneficial to my future career.So why not take the choice of living in the school dormitory wisely? 答案
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