2021高考英语读后续写专题（十一）
一：典题技法指导
Danny stood with his mother at the kitchen window of their tiny house. Mom put her arm around Danny. “Just look at that view,” she said. “Can you believe we live here? I think it’s the most beautiful place on earth.” Mom was right; it looked like a postcard out there, with the palm threes swaying in the breeze, the bushes covered with pink and white flowers, and the ocean a sparkling silver strip in the distance.
Danny couldn’t stand looking at it. All he wanted was to be back in New York City, looking out his old apartment window at the jumble of dirty buildings, the smoke thick in the air, and his friends.
Mom thought that coming here to Hawaii would give Danny a fresh start-just she and Danny. She wanted to get him away from danger and trouble.
After a while, Mom kissed Danny good-bye after straightening her white nurse’s cap and went off to work. Slowly Danny stood up, making a plan in his mind for his journey back to New York City. But then he heard a noise in his backyard. There was a crash, a strange squeal, and an earsplitting scream.
Danny flung open the back door. Mom’s new pot of flowers lay shattered on the ground. “Was someone in trouble? Or were robbers planning to break in?” thought Danny. He picked up a broom, ready to strike. He didn’t see anyone, but then he caught sight of a small dark head poking out from behind one of the thick bushes. Danny put down the broom and walked over. It was a little kid, maybe three years old. “What the hack was he doing here all by himself? Was he hurt?” thought Danny.
“Ahhhhhhhhhh!” the kid screamed. “Hey!” Danny said. The kid turned around. He was grinning like a monkey standing on a mountain of bananas. And he was clutching a little animal of some kind. “Puppy!” the kid said. Danny studied the animal. It was very small and black except for one white ear. He didn’t want to break the kid’s heart, but he was pretty sure it wasn’t a puppy. It looked more like a rat.
“My puppy!” the kid said, hugging the poor ugly critter so tight Danny was sure it would pop like a balloon. Danny looked around. The kid was too young to be wandering around on his own.
“Who are you?” Danny said, bending down to look the kid in the eye. “Aki!” he said. “Who you?” “I’m Danny,” said Danny. “Danny see my puppy?” Aki held out his poor squished pet like he wanted Danny to give it a big smooch.
And then the kid’s eyes got huge. He pointed to something over Danny’s shoulder. “Monster!” he said. Danny spun around and there, moving toward them, was the ugliest animal Danny had ever seen in his life. It was black, the size of a huge dog, with wiry bristles, a pig’s snout, and two huge spiked tusks sprouting right from its face like swords. It did look like a monster.
The animal grunted and snorted as it stared at Aki with beady black eyes.
Prepare to die! it seemed to be saying. And it seemed the monster was ready to charge at them.
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“Put down the puppy!” Danny said, suddenly understanding Paragraph 2:
“Aki want puppy,” he said, throwing his arms around Danny and burying his face in Danny’s chest. 文章主题：人与动物—“野兽口中智救小男孩” 本文大意：
妈妈和Danny是刚刚从New York City搬过来夏威夷，想要开始新生活的一家人，而Danny其实不大想来，心里想着原本的城市和朋友，很是孤单，还想回去。有一天，妈妈出去上班了，Danny一个人在家的时候，听到院子里有奇怪的声音，发现院子里有个名叫Aki的小男孩，抱着一个小动物，说是自己的“小狗狗”，但其实不是小狗，而此时，有一只丑陋无比的野兽出现了，看似对两个孩子很不友好。Danny机智地保护了Aki并获得了友谊。 学生收获： 本文有大量关于“险境脱身”、“野兽攻击”及体现小朋友神态的词汇和句式，另外，还有部分关于景色的地道描写，可以丰富人与动物之间续写题材的写作内容。 本文中核心、生疏词汇及拓展:
1. sway (v.) to move slowly from side to side 摇摆 翻译：树叶在温柔的微风中轻轻飘动。
_______________________________________________________________________________ 2. poke (v.)
to (cause something to) appear or stretch out from behind or through something else 探出来 翻译：她轻轻地敲了敲我的门，把脑袋探了进来。
_______________________________________________________________________________ 3. clutch (v.)
a. to hold tightly (in the hands) (用手)紧紧抓住 翻译：她手中正紧紧地抓着一个娃娃。
_______________________________________________________________________________ b. (with “at”) (with at) to try to take hold of 猛地想要抓住 翻译：我紧紧地抓住一块漂浮的木板，以免淹死。
_______________________________________________________________________________ 4. fling (v.) a. to rush 猛冲
翻译：他一下把门冲开了。
_______________________________________________________________________________ b. to throw with great force用力扔 翻译：他把一块砖头扔破了玻璃。
_______________________________________________________________________________ 5. charge (v.) to rush or to move quickly (towards) 冲 翻译：这只老虎似乎准备好冲向他了。
_______________________________________________________________________________ 6. nudge (v.) to push something or someone gently, especially to push someone with your elbow (= the middle part of your arm where it bends) to attract the person's attention （用手肘等身体部位）轻推
翻译：孩子们正一起咯咯地笑着，用手肘轻轻推搡着。
_______________________________________________________________________________ 原文自我检测： 环境描写篇：
1. 这里的风景看上去就像是明信片一样，棕榈树在微风中轻轻摇曳，灌木丛上裹着粉色和
2021届高考英语读后续写专题(十一)
