语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了中美两国亲子关系的对比，并结合自己的实际对如何与父母相处，发表了个人看法。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的话题parent-child relationship，点明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段对调查结果的第一项内容进行了介绍，并结合自己的经历，讲述了如何与父母相处。这是文章的主体部分，叙述非常详细，内容也很充实，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主题，点明了良好亲子关系的重要性。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语句通顺。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式和结构。行文连贯、自然，表达流畅。短文中较好的句型有：The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the
Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.等等。
11．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
你看过中央电视台董卿主持的节目《朗读者》吗？这是一档非常受欢迎的节目，让我们看到生活中读书的美好、读书的重要。请根据下面表格中所列的要点，以“Growing Up with Reading”为题写一篇短文。
要求：1．语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2．短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；
3．词数80词左右；文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
【答案】Have you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, and it makes us find the beauty and the importance about reading in our life.
Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading makes us confident and happy. Read good books. Proper books that can improve ourselves are better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading. Keep a love for reading. However, some of us spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time. I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more and develop a reading habit.
Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading become a part of our life! 【解析】试题分析：本文是材料作文，也是话题作文，话题是“读书伴我成长”，以“Growing Up with Reading（读书伴我成长）”为题写一篇短文。根据内容提示可知本文使用的时态有一般现在时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲，本文给词的要点就是提纲，把要点中的重要短语翻译成英文：the beauty and the importance/ get knowledge/ open our minds/ makes us confident and happy/ proper books that can improve ourselves/ read in a right way/ think about more/ spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time/ develop a reading habit./ Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading become a part of our life!；（二）根据提纲连词成句，连句成篇，注意连词的使用。（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。
点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。
12．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是Jack，中学英文报 WARM HEART专栏的编辑，近期你收到一封署名为 Asking的求助信，该同学在信中诉说了自己当前焦虑的情绪，请根据以下信息，给他写一封回信。 写作要点：
1. 表达你对他的理解并给予安慰。 2. 求助人焦虑情绪产生的原因。 （1）下周将要进行期末考试。
（2）尽管准备了很长时间，对成绩仍没有把握。 3. 为他如何消除考前焦虑提出具体建议并说明理由。 写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Hi, Asking,
I’m the editor of WARM HEART.
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【答案】I’m the editor of WARM HEART.I hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.
First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.
What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.
Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself. 【解析】 【详解】
本文属于话题作文，针对某位同学考前焦虑进行安慰，分析原因并给出消除焦虑的建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比较级，the+比较级，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+状语放句首，用半倒装。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
13．（·广东蛇口育才二中中考模拟）书面表达
初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求写一份发言稿，内容包括： 1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试 2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习 3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；…… 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Less Pressure Makes Better Life Hello, everyone!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _____
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【答案】Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.
I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They
always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies. Less pressure makes better life. Thank you. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。
14．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达
你们学校的生活丰富多彩吗？请以“Colorful weekdays”为题，介绍一下你们学校周一至周五（weekdays）都有哪些课外活动。 要求：1. 语意连贯，层次清晰； 2. 要有评价性描述； 3. 词数80左右。 【答案】Colorful weekdays
It is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you something about the part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my school’s part time activity. Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on.
Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the
(英语)初三英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧及经典题型及练习题(含答案)含解析
