(英语)英语书面表达专项习题及答案解析

（英语）英语书面表达专项习题及答案解析

一、英语书面表达

1．近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学 学生们认为 2.很新鲜，学习更感兴趣 3.…… 家长们认为 1.影响孩子视力 2.增加家庭负担 1.…… 2.…… 你的观点

注意：

1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥； 3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 iPads, coming into the classrooms

Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms

Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.

The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better. However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.

I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.

【解析】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描

述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。 点睛：对立观点式 第一段：提出现象。

第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.

They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 的第一个原

因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 的另一个原因。 第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X.

They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 的第一个理

由。 An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。 第四段：There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.

In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。

2．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。 提示：

1.个人基本情况介绍

2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。 3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。 要求：

1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。 2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 【答案】My junior high school life

My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better. 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括： 1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？ 2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？

3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？

要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, 【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.

Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.

In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones. 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．书面表达

假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你

的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 1位置:中国东部,安做省南部: 2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽 3.景点:山和古村落: 4.文化:茶、黄梅戏 5.建议

提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera 注意:1.词数80-100

2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名 4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数 Dear Dave

I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun? 【答案】Dear Dave，

I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.

Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down! Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你的家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。短文应使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并注意上下文的连贯。另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。 【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后具

体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。

5． 近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括： 1. 雾霾的危害 2. 雾霾产生的原因（2个） 3. 应对雾霾的措施（3个） 提示：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒的

注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

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【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.

How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.

What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a