【英语】初三英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)
及解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编 1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是李磊，中考（Senior High School Entrance Examination）在即，你在英国的笔友Andy给你发来电子邮件，想了解你近阶段的学习情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。 To: lilei@china.com From: andyblack@britain.com Subject:School life Dear Li Lei, It is nearly two months since I last received your email. I hear the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming in Wuxi! How is everything going with you? What do you think about your English classes? Who would you go for help when you have some trouble? Wish you good luck! Write to me soon. All the best, Andy 要求：1. 词数90左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 回复须符合邮件话题，结合自己情况适当发挥，使全文连贯通顺； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Dear Andy,
Thank you for your email. I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.
_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely LiLei
【答案】Dear Andy,
Thank you for your email. I am very glad to tell you something about my school life. I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English
grammar to us.When I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.
How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely LiLei
【解析】这是一篇回复书信类的提纲作文。内容为根据邮件的内容及自己的实际情况回复邮件。时态主要为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。写作要点包括：1、你一切都好吗？2、你觉得你的英语课怎么样？3、当你遇到麻烦时，你会找谁去帮忙？在动笔前，要认真审题，根据写作要点列出每个要点中可能要用到的表达，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，需要注意书信体裁的格式，要符合英语的表达习惯；注意表达的条理性、连贯性，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡符合逻辑关系；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
2．（·吉林省实验中考模拟）（B） 《朗读者》第五期节目中，主持人在开场白中说道：“我们的一生，会经历很多的第一次，难忘而又宝贵，它意味着我们的成长。”请谈谈你人生中最难忘的“第一次”，或许是第一次做家务、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并说说你从中学到了什么或有哪些收获。不少于80词。（文中不得出现真实的人名和校名） 【答案】The First Cooking
Last weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn't know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn't lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed. 【解析】 【分析】
本文为材料作文，需要写出第一次做某事，人生中有许多第一次，可以挑选一件让自己感觉深刻，并且从中学到了许多东西的事件来写，这样的话，贴近生活实际，学生有话可说。 【详解】
本文写了我的第一次做饭，先交代背景知识，因为父母不在家，所以我不得不自己动手，动手做的过程中，由于没有经验，理所当然地失败了。但是，我不能气馁，要从失败中找原因，从哪里跌倒，就从哪里起来，所以，第二周，我让妈妈教我做菜，获得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放弃，就能获得成功。 【点睛】
本篇作文贴近实际，每个人都有第一次，挑选一件自己有话可说的来写即可。但是需要注意文章逻辑，语篇顺序，注意连接词的使用和长短句结合。这样的话，文章符合英文造句习惯，更容易获得高分。
3．（·江苏中考模拟）加入你是英国交流学生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 两个
月的学习生活即将结束。请你根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle School 校长写一封感谢信。
? what you've learned about Chinese culture ? how the teachers and students help you ? what your homestay family do for you 注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。
2. 词数 80 左右，感谢信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us. 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my thanks to you. During my two-month stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.
I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a P.E. teacher.It is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese paper-cutting in Art lessons.Though I can’t speak Chinese.I have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.
I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make dumplings.We also visited Confucins Temple.We had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us. 【解析】 【详解】
本文是一篇书信作文。根据以下提示，以 Neil的名义，用英语给 Sunshine Middle School 校长写一封感谢信。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
4．（·江苏中考模拟）三年的初中生活即将结束，你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。下周五你班要召开毕业班会，请根据下面的英文提示，并适当发挥，以“I remember ”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。 要点如下：1. What’s the event? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. How did you feel at that moment? 4. How has the event changed your life? 注意：1.短文需包含以上要点，并适当发挥。 2.短文中已给出的部分，不计入总词数。 3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。 I remember
How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end. 【答案】I remember
How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.
When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.
Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.
It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如come to an end，plan to do，a lot of，hold a charity sale，prepare for，in our spare time，hold on，at first，come to join us，give us some help，in the end，a lot，in need等。而复杂并列结构It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us.和When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
5．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇题为\，my teacher!\的短文参加此次活动．要点如下： （1）严格要求 （2）耐心指导 （3）热情鼓励；
注意：（1）词数80～100； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 （3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称． （4）…
注意：（1）词数80-100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 （3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称 【答案】Thank you，my teacher!
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（严格要求）【高分句型一】
During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指导）
Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（热情鼓励）
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（表示感谢） 【解析】 【分析】
本文是一篇抒情记叙文。 【详解】
英语作文一般分为三个部分
第一部分：开篇点题，交代写作目的——感谢老师为我做的一切。 第二部分：交代感谢英语老师的原因
[英语]初三英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧分析及练习题（含答案）及解析
